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yay

I personally would have preferred more low heavy guitars, but that's just me. Your playing is superb, and the effects were really cool. :) I like all those bends in there, just don't too carried away so that they sound out of tune. :P

Nice job. Keep up the great work!

~cornandbeans

KitsuMech responds:

I do try to keep a balance of the lower guitars and the higher and harmonized parts. But I did get carried away with the higher parts this time xD

Thank you very much for the review!

:D :D

woaaa

nice :)

I remember playing this on Flash Flash Revolution. My song 'Rose' is gonna be on there in December. :D:D

Aw man you should have added that cool kick fill. :( Oh well. This kicks enough ass as it is. :P Keep up the awesome work!

~cornandbeans

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

woah thanks for the 10 cornandbeans!!

lol

hahaha nice

you should have gotten this into the christmas audio contest in october. :P

brings back happy memories. :)

hmm

Well... I don't know. It's pretty dancy, nice work on that. It seems more like background music for a video game or something...

Ohhh... Nice arp there. That ears some points. :) You might have a bit too much resonance on it.. it sounds really muddy in parts. Of course, it gives it that 'futuristic' feel i guess. :P

Not much else to say. Nice job, keep em coming. :)

5/5
~cornandbeans

nice!

It's been awhile since I've heard anything from you. This is a pretty sweet track, that bass drum is really heavy. :) I love those glitch-esqe breaks in the middle... the triplets really make it what it is. I'm not really blown away by the synths, but I can see an enormous amount of effort put into the drums. :) GREAT job.

keep it up.

~cornandbeans

PERVOK responds:

Thanks. This was supposed to originally be a dance track, but when I slowed it down and added that sliced solo it just... sounded so much better. So thats why the synths aren't exactly so flashy, cause the heavy dance drums were supposed to fill that space. But, they aren't there anymore.

Lol.

Thanks for the comments and everything, and hey, lookie here:

Size | 4,000.94k

IM A BADASS CUZ I BREAK THE RULES, HAH.

Thanks again.

hmm ok

I might sound heavy on the critical points, but I'm just trying to help you.

-Never use reverb on drums, maybe on hi hats and claps, but never on bassdrums. I makes the whole song really muddy. :/

-That snare roll in the beginning leads up to absolutely nothing, maybe add a crash or something after and then come in with all the other synths. I think the snare gets way to loud though, you have to be able to clearly hear everything else.

-The bass seems really high and on the beat. That's ok, but if you're going for techno, you would usually have a bassline more centered around the offbeat. I gives that push-pull feeling with the kick. so it would be like kick-bass-kick-bass... yea. Of course you can vary it up, some people like to have 2 really fast 16th notes instead of one 8th note. Just experiment until you find what you like. :)

-The song seems to have no real flow to it progression wise. You need to take the listener somewhere when you write a song, lots of transitions, fade ins-outs, filter sweeps, that sort of thing. I would also suggest compressing your songs, it might mask a bit of that 'FL' quality with some professional sounding stuff. :)

If you get on msn, we can chat and I'll show you around some stuff. Don't get me wrong, you're really good for just starting.

MxG-7 responds:

:D thanks
dont worry i wont take any criticism to harshly as long as its justified with reasoning and stuff
as long as its not just like
"hey man you suck go die"
then im fine

yay!

glad to see you post again. :)

nice incorperation of vox, somewhat cheesy words though. :P

That stutter/low release synth was really cool. :)

do you have msn? I'd love to get to talk to you sometime.

5/5

~cornandbeans

pure talent

Wow, this is a really great submission. You've got some nice melodies. Drums are really diverse, too. I can only complain about your mastering. The song itself was way too light, and sounded absent of most low frequencies. Fix that and you've got an amazingly professional track.

I still can't believe you're not more popular.

Would you mind checking out some of my tracks? I'd love to hear your opinion.

~cornandbeans

Erectronik responds:

Lolol! I wish I was more popular, I've just come back to NG because I lived back in the day when we had massive amounts of zero voters who gave themselves 5 and were number one of course :P, it's getting late here and I've got a midterm tomorrow, so I will be checking out your tracks soon

Erectronik

OMG

let me remix let me remix!!

amazing melody, man. sry for unhelpful review. :P

dj-Nate responds:

Yeah, I hate remixing things. I'll send you the .FLP if you want, lol.

<3 yay!

I'm not gonna lie, I seriosly love you. :D :D

It's great to hear that I'm actually making an impact on people, it seems just like yesterday when I joined here. ^^

I like your composing techniques, the triplet change-up was especially cool. :)

Maybe we should collaberate? You've got a really great sound, and just because you thought of my song that's an extra 10 points lol

15/5
~cornandbeans

dj-Nate responds:

Why thank you Mr. CnB! Thanks for the review tons. I would be honored to to a collab. You have MSN or AIM? Cool, just PM me whenever you get this. Or, idk, maybe I'll just PM you. Alright, thanks again for the review. See ya.

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