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nice!

I really liked it. You seem to know your way pretty well around FL. One suggestion though-- try to get some external VSTs and soundfonts, especially piano ones. Everything is very good, I just think that having a signature tone would really bring out your true talent. I'm really glad I checked out your music, I'll have to download this along with your Heartbeatz Jumpz remix. btw, thanks for the nice review you gave me. :)

~cornandbeans

P.S.-- a great place to get soundfonts is www.hammersound.net, and just google VST freeware.

DUDE!

7 reviews already?? lucky bastard! it took me almost a month to get my first review! Send me the flp of this one and I'll master it for you. I really like the melodies you got going here.

btw, you are on the ng mag radio. and I'm on msn. :P

XD XD

omg this is hilarious

this your voice i presume?

Nostrap responds:

I did the beat and had my friend do a voiceover since he has a deep voice.

woa

Dude, this would be so sweet if you brought in some detune sine and really heavy dnb drums after the first little break... I really like it though, it just seems to lack the energy. The glitch would sound sweet in the background, maybe bring it in during some air time. ;)

~cornandbeans

btw, where/how did you get those glitchy sounds? I'm kinda a nub in that field. :(

muahahaha

i like that beginning. The snare could have been a bit louder, though. The acid is cool. Me likes. :)

All you need is a heavy bass drum, and possibly a little more rhythmic construction. Did you compress this? It might keep it more balanced if you turned it down slightly.

So just make things stand out a bit more, that's it. I like it though, it needs a bit more character though.

Oooh nice thing there with the pan. :) The ending is sweet, too. :)

Ah, good work dude. I look forward to hearing more from you soon. Keep it up!

~cornandbeans

dj-padman1 responds:

Thanks man, I churned this one out super quick just for the hell of it. I should go back to it though, because I was kind of happy with some of the acid.

You're dead right man, compression is way off on this one. I lost the plot a bit! damn!

The next one will hit the spot, I promise!

Thanks for dropping by, you're getting to be the 'Master of the AP'. Always appreciate your feedback. But go easy on the 10's ok? ;P

oh my!!!

nice job! you learned the power of teh fl drumz0rz! :D:D:D:D:D:D

so... I like it! Keep it up. You might want to switch up the drum pattern a bit, but for your first try, that was excellent! :)

<3 <3 <3

*jaw drops*

holy fuck dude!!

haha this is sweet. even though the mastering isn't great, I don't know where to start with criticism. The messyness adds to the wonderful chaos. Kick ass, bro. Keep it up.

~cab

AH!

I really want to remix this! please? send me a pm. Very catchy, melodic, and inspiring. Keep it up!

~cornandbeans

nice, very relaxing

I'm liking the strings there.

=O

That ambient synth reminds me of this level in donkey kong. The bubbling is great too. Oh, and I just noticed-- you might want to set your poly limit a bit higher on the synth.. just a suggestion.

yea..

+ excellent melodies :)
+ quietly powerful, I don't know how do explain in other words.

- poly limit on synth... yep.

So that's about it. I like it, even though it's a big jump in what you usually do. Keep up the great work!

~cornandbeans

itsameyayo responds:

Uh...what's a poly limit?

-SuperDrummer146-

:) howdy

hehe, cool intro. Very ambient and screechy. :P You might want to switch up the drums a bit, it gets kinda repetitive.

I like when you come in with the bass thing. I'm not very good at judging industrial tracks, so I'm gonna keep it short, sorry. :|

+ Varied sfx, all of them done very well.
+ Intense, to the point. Steady and powerful.

- repetitive drums, maybe another break or something would do it.
- maybe add some pads to give it melodic depth? I'm not sure if that would take away from the industrialness.

So, good job. I think there's room for improvement, but it's a solid track. Keep up the good work. :)

~cornandbeans

P.S. Mind checking out my new song 'Firestorm'? I'd like to hear your opinion on it. :)

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