hmm ok
I might sound heavy on the critical points, but I'm just trying to help you.
-Never use reverb on drums, maybe on hi hats and claps, but never on bassdrums. I makes the whole song really muddy. :/
-That snare roll in the beginning leads up to absolutely nothing, maybe add a crash or something after and then come in with all the other synths. I think the snare gets way to loud though, you have to be able to clearly hear everything else.
-The bass seems really high and on the beat. That's ok, but if you're going for techno, you would usually have a bassline more centered around the offbeat. I gives that push-pull feeling with the kick. so it would be like kick-bass-kick-bass... yea. Of course you can vary it up, some people like to have 2 really fast 16th notes instead of one 8th note. Just experiment until you find what you like. :)
-The song seems to have no real flow to it progression wise. You need to take the listener somewhere when you write a song, lots of transitions, fade ins-outs, filter sweeps, that sort of thing. I would also suggest compressing your songs, it might mask a bit of that 'FL' quality with some professional sounding stuff. :)
If you get on msn, we can chat and I'll show you around some stuff. Don't get me wrong, you're really good for just starting.